高考幫直播學(xué)科答疑：作文怎么寫(xiě)才高級(jí)？

　　針對(duì)如何拯救平淡的作文，愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師針對(duì)性的回答了同學(xué)們提出的問(wèn)題。下面是本次答疑匯總，希望對(duì)同學(xué)們英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作有幫助。

　　一、作文怎么寫(xiě)才高級(jí)

　　問(wèn)題1：老師能給一些高級(jí)萬(wàn)能句式嗎，還有普通常用詞用高級(jí)詞匯替換的。

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練--必備必會(huì)句型 主語(yǔ) 1. It is said that more students will have the chance to get to college this year. 2. It is clear/obvious/apparent that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 3. It is necessary/important/essential/ proper/ urgent that we (should) close the gap between the rural and urban area. 4. It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers. 5. It is no good talking without thinking carefully. 6. It is ten years since I graduated from this school. 7. It will be years before we know whether this medicine is effective to cancer. 8. It was not until the small factories were shut down that the river became clean again. 9. It took us quite some time to collect useful information from internet. 10. It's time that we did something to protect the environment. 11. What surprised him most was that he found his hometown had greatly changed. 賓語(yǔ) 12. I find it necessary to take down notes while listening. 13. They believe that it's their duty to help the people in need. 表語(yǔ) 14. This is because the surface of the earth is not flat but round. 15. That is why I am late for school. 定語(yǔ) 16. It was midnight when his father arrived home after work. 17. As is known to all, the 29th Olympic Games was held in Beijing in 2008. 18. The reason why I was late was that I was caught in the traffic jam this morning. 狀語(yǔ) 19. He was saving as much as possible in order to pay for his fresh year in the university. 20. She took some books with her in order that she would not get bored during the long journey. 21. He is so selfish that nobody wants to work with him. 22. He shut the window with such force that the glass broke. 23. We were too moved to say a word when we received the unexpected gifts from our parents. 24. I didn't know the truth until she told me what happened. 25. He talks a lot as if he knew everything. 26. I was about to go out when the telephone rang. 27. He was on his way to a lecture, when a tourist stopped him and asked him for directions. 28. Some people waste food, while others haven't enough. 29. He was so tired that he fell asleep with his shoes on. 30. No matter what problem he faces, he always thinks about others first. 31. However hard he tries, he never seems able to do the work well. 32. The more we practice, the better we get at listening to speech in a foreign language. 33. It is a good idea to start a part-time job so long as it doesn't affect your studies. 34. The moment he reached the country, he started his search. 35. By 1820 the population of New York had grown to about 125,000, making it the largest city in USA. 常用短語(yǔ) 1. You'd better take a raincoat with you otherwise you may be caught in the rain. 2. He would rather listen to others than talk himself. 3. He prefers to make speeches after careful preparation. 4. Tom prefers to stay up late to finish the work rather than leave it done the next day. 5. Forests can not only fresh the air but also reduce noises. 6. You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam. 7. Neither he nor I know what happened to the old man. 8. Football, as well as computer games, is popular with young people. 9. Apart from the literature books, there are quite a few magazines in our library as well. 10. I got two CDs yesterday. One is of Taylor Swift, the other is of Rihanna. 11. There will be many foreigners living in our school during the Olympic Games. Some of them will be from Europe, while others will come from America or Asia. 12. What we do will make the world more beautiful. 13. He seemed to have known all about it. 14. In the library, I came across the very book I was looking for. 15. To her surprise, she got a bunch of flowers as a present on her birthday. 16. I had a roll of film developed last week. 17. Thanks to our efforts, everything is going smoothly. (Due to/Owing to) 18. I'm sure it's not what he intended to do. 19. But for the rain, we should have had a pleasant journey. 20. Look! There is a man drowning in the river. 21. There is a novel written by Lu Xun on the table. 22. Xiao Li asked me if there was going to be a lecture about British Literature given by Dr. Lee on Sunday afternoon. 23. You can see a new library where there used to be a pool. 24. There is no doubt that we can swim across the river. (We cannot deny that…=There is no denying that….) 25. Sports and games are of great value. 26. With the increase/growth of the population/With the advance of science and technology, 27. In the age of information and communication, mobile phones are playing an important role in our daily life.

　　問(wèn)題2：老師，關(guān)于邀請(qǐng)別人的作文能給個(gè)亮點(diǎn)的開(kāi)頭模版句嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：(1) It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to …. (2) It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to …… (3) We should be very grateful if you could ….

　　問(wèn)題3：老師哪里可以找到高級(jí)素材？？？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：體會(huì)一下這些同義句在表達(dá)上的區(qū)別 1. Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable. Thanks tothe good weather，our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred tome./ A good idea suddenlystruckme. 4.The students there needn't pay for their books. Books are free for the students there. 5.As a result the plan was a failure. The planturned out to be a failure. 6.When he arrives，please give me an e-mail. On his arriving，please give me an e-mail. 7.To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 8.Though I'm weak，I'll make the effort. Weak as I am，I'll make the effort. 9.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.（用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型替換） It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 10.I passed the physics exam because of your help.（用虛擬語(yǔ)氣） I couldn't have passed the physics exam but for your help.

　　問(wèn)題4：老師作文句子多用特殊句型好嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：最好作為亮點(diǎn)設(shè)置，比如首尾段和段落首尾句。每天吃粗茶淡飯，來(lái)頓大餐可以饕餮一番�？擅刻焐秸浜Ｎ�，也會(huì)覺(jué)得寡淡無(wú)味了。作文中常規(guī)的句子和特殊句型也差不多是這樣的關(guān)系。

　　問(wèn)題5：老師，我想知道，一篇優(yōu)秀作文所具備的要素，謝謝。

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：主旨切題、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰緊湊；要點(diǎn)齊全、內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確、句式多樣、詞匯豐富；語(yǔ)義一致連貫。當(dāng)然，如果能在此基礎(chǔ)上有一定的創(chuàng)新或日常積累的體現(xiàn)會(huì)更好，比如名言、諺語(yǔ)、文化常識(shí)等。

　　問(wèn)題6：英語(yǔ)作文的簡(jiǎn)單句中，怎么才能讓這個(gè)句子有些亮點(diǎn)？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：添加修飾語(yǔ)，比如定語(yǔ)、不同類(lèi)型的狀語(yǔ)或同位語(yǔ)。比如：Last Sunday, I went to the park.這個(gè)及其基礎(chǔ)的簡(jiǎn)單句，可以通過(guò)添加不同類(lèi)型的狀語(yǔ)變成后面這個(gè)句子： On the morning of last Sunday, I, together with several friends, paid a visit to the People's Park by bike, talking and laugh all the way.

　　問(wèn)題7：老師 什么樣的詞匯才算高級(jí)呢？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：good-beneficial；happy-delightful；say-introduce/explain等。

　　問(wèn)題8：感覺(jué)平時(shí)背了看了不少，但是大概練的少，如倒裝句，考試時(shí)總寫(xiě)不出。

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：是的�？吹谋车亩疾皇亲约旱模�只要自己把思考和行動(dòng)結(jié)合起來(lái)，能夠準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用才是自己的。I hear and I forget. I see and I remember. I do and I understand.

　　問(wèn)題9：老師 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾 特別是結(jié)尾 該怎么收能得高分？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：一、開(kāi)頭用語(yǔ)： 良好的開(kāi)端等于成功的一半．在寫(xiě)作文時(shí)，通常以最簡(jiǎn)單也最常用的方式---開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山法。也就是說(shuō), 直截了當(dāng)?shù)靥岢瞿銓?duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題的看法或要求，點(diǎn)出文章的中心思想。 1. 議論論文： A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages． B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient. C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,... D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life. F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 書(shū)信： A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar. B. I read an advertisement in today's China Daily and I apply for the job... C. Thank you for your letter of May 5. D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9. E. How nice to hear from you again. 3. 口頭通知或介紹情況： A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make. B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you. C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you. 4. 演講稿： A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A B alance Diet and Health. B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二、總結(jié)用語(yǔ)： in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters. B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted. 記敘文結(jié)尾，一般需要抒情或議論作為升華，可以用強(qiáng)調(diào)句或倒裝句這樣的特殊句式。The experience is meant to stay fresh in my mind, reminding me that not only should I always be grateful to others for their kind act, but I am also supposed to do my own bit to make contributions to our school.應(yīng)用文結(jié)尾常有固定模板，按照文體類(lèi)型積累一些。比如邀請(qǐng)函結(jié)尾：We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.感謝信結(jié)尾：Again, allow me to express our sincere appreciation to your work. 道歉信結(jié)尾： Anyhow, I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to making another appointment with you. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.

　　問(wèn)題10：老師，but有什么高級(jí)的可以替代嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：保持并列句的形式可以用however， yet，nevertheless，nonetheless。

　　問(wèn)題11：老師，為什么clean前面不要加to？平行結(jié)構(gòu)不是要一致嗎？還有，in the front of與in front of的區(qū)別是什么？什么時(shí)候可以互換，什么時(shí)候不可以？分別用于什么情況?

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：此處為兩個(gè)不定式to reduce the industrial pollution和to clean the water的并列，并列不定式第二個(gè)to可以省略。順便補(bǔ)充一下不定式省略to的其他情況：一、使役動(dòng)詞后省略to。在let, make, have等使役動(dòng)詞后用作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)的不定式必須省略to。二、感官動(dòng)詞后省略to。"五看兩聽(tīng)一感覺(jué)" see, look at, watch, observe, notice, listen to, hear, feel后用作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)的不定式必須省略to。三、動(dòng)詞help后省略to。help sb. （to）do，此時(shí)to可省可不省。以上三種動(dòng)詞用于被動(dòng)時(shí)，to要還原。四、why (not)"后省略to。在why (not)"?之后的不定式不能帶to。如：Why （not）go with him? 六、介詞except / but后省略to用作介詞except, but賓語(yǔ)的不定式有時(shí)帶to，有時(shí)不帶to。其大致原則是：若其前出現(xiàn)了動(dòng)詞 do的任意形式，其后的不定式通常不帶 to；若其前沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)動(dòng)詞 do，則其后的不定式通常帶 to。七、主語(yǔ)帶do表語(yǔ)省略to。當(dāng)主語(yǔ)部分有動(dòng)詞do的某種形式 時(shí)，用作表語(yǔ)的不定式可以省略to。如：All you do now is (to) complete the form.in front of譯為：在……前面,指相對(duì)位置（即甲在乙前面） 例：Mr.Lee sits in front of me. in the front of 譯為：在……（中的）前部,指內(nèi)部位置（即甲在某地內(nèi)部的前面） 例：Mr.Lee sits in the front of the lecture hall. 基本上不互換。

　　問(wèn)題12：老師，為什么要用arriving而不是arrived,它不是過(guò)去時(shí)嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：when之后加的是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，doing現(xiàn)在分詞表示主動(dòng)、進(jìn)行。主動(dòng)是指邏輯主語(yǔ)I（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)時(shí)，邏輯主語(yǔ)即句子主語(yǔ)。此題即是。）與該動(dòng)詞arrive之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，進(jìn)行是指與句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞saw同時(shí)發(fā)生。如果你用arrived，那就是過(guò)去分詞，表達(dá)的意思是被動(dòng)、完成，不合邏輯。其實(shí)when arriving there=when I arrived there。你所說(shuō)的它是過(guò)去時(shí)，得是在有主語(yǔ)的完整句子中。

　　問(wèn)題13：老師，為什么要用worried而不是worry,平行結(jié)構(gòu)前面有feel,后面不是要用worry嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：此處worried作為形容詞使用與worse并列，都是feel的內(nèi)容。

　　問(wèn)題14：老師 我的卷面不是太好 這個(gè)很影響作文嗎？

　　愛(ài)智康劉珊珊老師：很影響，少則影響一兩分，多則影響一檔。