2018高考備考：英語作文評分標準及范文10篇
2018-02-05 16:30:47英語幫幫
書面表達題的考查要點及評分原則
準確運用語法、詞匯、拼寫、標點。使用某些句型、短語、清楚地表達自己的意思，寫出流暢易懂的短文。
從四個角度, 分5-6個檔次給分, 評分主要從以下幾個方面考慮：
1) 內(nèi)容要點 (content points) 。
2) 運用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量。
3) 詞匯的準確運用與句子的結構把握 (accuracy of vocabulary and structures) 。
4) 上下文的連貫性(coherence)。
各個檔次的給分范圍及標準(滿分25分)
第五檔(很好)：(21-25分)
1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。
4.語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。
5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3.應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。
4.語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致。
5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6.達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1.基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2.雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3.應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。
4.有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。
6.整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1.未恰當完成試題規(guī)定的任務。
2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關內(nèi)容。
3.語法結構單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。
4.有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
5.較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1.未完成試題規(guī)定的任務。
2.明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3.語法結構單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。
4.較多語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
5.缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。
6.信息未能傳達給讀者。
F.不得分：(0分)
范文
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Dear Sir，
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students.
Nowadays，iPads are very popular in our school. Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion. There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so on. In other words，it's helpful to our studies，especially our English learning.
However，each coin has two sides. Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere. What's worse，some even waste their precious time playing games.
In my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroom. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
Hi guys,
Good news for you! A Karaoke party will be held in our School Lecture Hall on May 4, 2015. The party organized by Student Union of Xinhua Middle School will start at 7:00 pm and last for about two hours. Teachers and students who like English songs are all welcome to attend the party.
I’m willing to invite you to the party and expecting to sing an English song together with you. I hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you. Let’s enjoy ourselves. Please call 89346752 for further information.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Senior middle school graduates students of our school have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.
About 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interests. They say interest is the mother of success. It is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.
Most of the students, however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of our society. They argue that not everyone can find the job they like best. Besides, interest is not something unchangeable. We can always develop it.
Interestingly, about 20% of the students find it difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision for them.
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Dear friends,
In recent years, with the popularity of the Internet, many of us devote a great deal of time to it. As a consequence, we don’t write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions:
To begin with, we are supposed to spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails. Beautiful handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting.
Students’ Union
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Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings
and opinions and even get help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
I hold the view that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.
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Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, you can find the teaching building on your left and the gymnasium on your right. Walking on further, you can see a round building which is the library in the middle of the campus. The building on the northwest corner serves as the dining hall and the building opposite it on the northeast corner is the students ‘dormitory.
The high school has a history of nearly 100 years. There are about 5000 students studying here and a teaching staff of about 300. The campus covers an area of 24000 square meters with bushes and flowers surrounding every building, which provides a quiet and beautiful environment for the students.
（七）
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.
My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides, they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often. But in my view, it is TV that gives me something that I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.
In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.
（八）
Ladies and gentlemen, I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about fog and haze weather. Since the end of last year, fog and haze weather has occurred a lot in some areas of China, which has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened because of the bad weather. Besides, more and more citizens have to go to see the doctor because of the serious disease caused by the fog and haze.
We should take measures to reduce fog and haze weather. The government should suggest people go to work or school with the public transportation. Also more trees should be planted. As for me，I will go to school by bike or on foot.
Would you join us in protecting the environment?
Thank you.
（九）
Attention, please everyone! Welcome to this resort!
You are lucky enough to arrive here at the very season to visit the famous place of interest, for a great many flowers are in full bloom.
Before we climb up the mountain, I have something important to tell you. Firstly, you’re expected to stay with the group all the time and not fall far behind the others; otherwise, it will cause a lot of trouble. Secondly, while climbing up the mountain, mind your steps to avoid possible accidents along the narrow paths. Last but the most important, smoking is strictly forbidden in the area in case of forest fires.
I hope you’ll have a pleasant trip. Enjoy your time！
（十）
Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jinan. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.
I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy-going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.
Looking forward to your reply .
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yang
