托福寫作常見病句分析（五）
2014-12-25 16:19:12留學(xué)網(wǎng)整理
41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改進(jìn): I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改進(jìn): Luckily, he knew an American professor.
43. They will learn the bad habits.
改進(jìn): They will develop bad habits.
44. In this continued process, people make progress.
改進(jìn): In this cycle, people make progress.
45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改進(jìn): Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改進(jìn): By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改進(jìn): A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改進(jìn): You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
改進(jìn): Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
50. I felt alone.
改進(jìn): I felt lonely
